The kiss was a long one. He didn’t want to break away from the bliss of the encounter, but he was sure that a short interruption might secure his future kisses. Despite his passion, he reasoned that a declaration of his love would lead to a lifetime of affection and passionate exhilaration with the person he(…)
Many people suggest all sorts of ways to sharpen your writing. A lot of the advice is about simplification. Replace long words with short ones. Keep your sentences short. Delete words whenever possible. Use white space. Use adjectives and adverbs sparingly. And, of course, use the active voice. All of this is good advice. If(…)